Should this author have hired an editor?

  • Yes, I didn't turn the page.
    90.91%
    10 votes

     
  • No, I turned the page.
    9.09%
    1 vote

     

Posted 7 months.

1 Comment

  • Scott fair - 6 months ago

    The excessive description kills it for me. Cutting all the "special agent" references and such, and getting to the action of some sort, and I'd be interested.

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