Should this author have hired an editor?

Posted 2 months.

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  • Lilly - 2 months ago

    Sorry, but when I came to "fertile smile" I came to a stop, trying to figure out what it could be. After that, I could not get back into the story. If the church exploding were moved up, I would continue reading.

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