My Sister The Scientist
3 Comments

  • Leslie L Goodman - 6 days ago

    #3 gets my vote for stating specific examples, helping to give a clear picture of Gabby and her predicament. ht

  • Kathy Chalas - 6 days ago

    The “Gabby has a lot to say ...” pitch seems more kid-friendly and shares the essence of her problem without being too wordy or detached. I can glean quite a bit about Gabby and her personality from these few lines!

  • Kim Larson - 1 week ago

    I like 2 because it give more information and isn't as vague as the others.

Leave a Comment

0/4000 chars


Submit Comment