Would you turn Judy's page? Be tough. Share insights with a comment.

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  • John V - 11 years ago

    No. I liked the first sentence. It never hurts to start with the name of the POV character. I've noticed that Preston/Childs (Relic and a bunch of other books) do this frequently. Unfortunately, the missing HADs took me right out of it, and the rest was just description and backstory.

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