Which is the best opening line?

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Posted 10 years.

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  • Dan Smith - 10 years ago

    Forbidden fruit has always been a great way to hook me. Nicky's map holds all kinds of tension and promises. What does it show? Why did Nicky's dad strike him over it? How did Nicky finally obtain the map? Etc etc.

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