Would you turn Chris's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

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Posted 10 years.

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  • J.C. Towler - 10 years ago

    The main thing that jumped out at me was the two comparisons used in a short span of time for The Sixty Six. First a knife, then a snake. Dunno...just would have picked one and stuck with it and maybe built on it if I was going to go to that well again.


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