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  • J.C. Towler - 15 years ago

    The main thing that jumped out at me was the two comparisons used in a short span of time for The Sixty Six. First a knife, then a snake. Dunno...just would have picked one and stuck with it and maybe built on it if I was going to go to that well again.

    --John

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