No turn. How many times have we read pretty much the same description of a crowded marketplace? This is well written, but I'm tired of seeing this as an opening. I already have a picture of a crowded marketplace in my mind. All you have to do is mention it and get on with the action. You can add more description in passing if you like.
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No turn. How many times have we read pretty much the same description of a crowded marketplace? This is well written, but I'm tired of seeing this as an opening. I already have a picture of a crowded marketplace in my mind. All you have to do is mention it and get on with the action. You can add more description in passing if you like.