Would you turn Cara's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

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  • Mysti - 14 years ago

    I liked this a lot - sentences were well crafted and the voice was compelling - I agree with the tension comments by Ray, but I still turned the page. This is one of the better posts I've seen IMHO. Great writing Cara.

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