Would you turn the page after the prologue? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

  • Dan - 10 years ago

    The backstory is a killer, an anchor pulling the story right to the bottom. Eliminate paragraphs 2 and 3, at least push them back 10 or 20 pages.

  • T.S. - 10 years ago

    You gave away too much. by filling in the backstory, you left up swith no tension, no questions. Teh details of why he's guiding the U-Boat should be spread over several chapters.

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