The prologue worked for me. It had action and conflict. It gave the reader some questions to think about - why does he want to kill this woman, who is he, does he want to kill her or is he practicing his targetting?
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The prologue worked for me. It had action and conflict. It gave the reader some questions to think about - why does he want to kill this woman, who is he, does he want to kill her or is he practicing his targetting?