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Total Votes: 162
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  • JohnK - 13 years ago

    I just read the first two chapters and would have kept reading. The scene is set very well, the characters are developing and there is enough tension to keep reading. I feel there's a "Last Picture Show' quality to this tale. Nicely done!

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