Which works better as an opening to my novel?
Calloway remembered trying to peer through the tinted windows of the PlusOne shuttles. He pretended he could see into them but could only smell them. The faintest whiff of bleach and sweat and somethi
Calloway had never seen grass in the ground before. He remembered his mother had kept pots of it after their healer recommended it would be good for her to take care of something.
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