Would you turn Antonia's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

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Poll posted 7 years ago.

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  • sugarglider58 - 7 years ago

    I'd turn the page because the image of the dead couple hanging from the tree is so arresting, but I'd be hoping the author would tone down the adjectives and rely less on cataloging the fauna munching on them -- the rhythm of the sentences is a little too breathless for my taste.

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