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Would you turn Melody's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

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  • Robin - 12 years ago

    I wanted to know why the crouching and kept reading. Then the beaker broke. Got a little hint there about location and that seemed interesting. Then the 'project' comment. I'm curious enough to keep reading for a few pages.

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