Would you turn Tricia's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.
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  • Robin - 9 years ago

    Trish, I vote with Ray on putting the shoplifting right at the beginning. As it is I mildly wondered why A wanted in so badly, but didn't really care. Had I known she was going to confront someone with shoplifting, sick or not, I'd pay attention because I'd want to see how this confrontation would go. But, here's the thing...I really admire you for submitting. Bravo!

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