How did you feel about this first page?
1 - Couldn't get through it. Back to the drawing board.
2 - Read the whole thing, but couldn't look past problems with the writing to enjoy the story.
3 - Read the whole thing, was entertained at times, but I probably wouldn't read on.
4 - Read the whole thing and liked it. Wasn't really "wowed" but would read on.
5 - Read the whole thing and loved it. I would read the rest of the book.
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