If the synopsis above was on the back of a book, would you open it?
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  • Tricia - 5 years ago

    I voted No. But I wanted to explain why, so that the reason might be helpful. The story actually sounds compelling - and it is likely that I would have to open the cover and read the first few pages, but based on the back alone I am not sure. The language is a bit heavy and the tenses are some confused. I think it is a really strong effort though and will take very little work to make it exactly what you want. I hope that it helps! Best of luck

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