Would you turn the page with that as the opening?

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  • Terri - 11 years ago

    Hi Ray and thank you for the flogging and the comments. I like it. This is a WIP that I have horrible writer's block on and thought a public flogging might help get me off of dead center. This tale is loosely based on an actual case that I followed when I worked for the prosecutor. Yup, the dumb ass really confessed at a seance. Problem is that real life case usually have very mundane endings and I'd written myself into a corner. So, now that you've given me something to chew on, I might be able to reorder and rework it (it's waaaaaay too linear in present form). Way cool! Thanks again and keep up the good work. Terri

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