Speaking as an author myself I think the second blurb is marginally better than the first but both are too long. The best blurbs are short and catchy. The last paragraph of the second blurb is pretty close to what I mean. It could convince me to buy the book. Oh I also like the title.
"Full of humor and action in equal measure, Indiot is a page-turning wild ride. Hold onto your valuables, as you meet a whole new cast of wacky characters and discover what can happen if you mix enough adrenaline with lunacy and enthusiasm."
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