Were you compelled to turn the page?

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  • Jennifer Roundell - 5 years ago

    The story-question at line 17 almost got me to turn the page, but the 3 characters on the dock were too caricature for me to become engaged in the story. If they're supposed to be too over-the-top, I would need some comment on that from the protagonist

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